Her eyes are what makes this picture - and I like the glint from her nose ring :p

Overall very good - I might have cropped more off the bottom and left more on the right edge.

I love portraits with freckles. They just sort of add a little something extra. It's a really nice shot generally. I think it would have been better if it was framed a little higher so we get the top of her head. And the dark line on the right side is a little distracting.