Response to City (Response #17)

Uploaded 1023 Days Ago by Anna - 9 comments

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katznjamn said 1023 days ago:

Love the composition!

Beamer said 1023 days ago:

So, this week I'm going to take a break on commenting on Relevance. I'm going to take everybody's word for it and concentrate on the other four categories...

The composition could be better, the bit of dark curb showing at the bottom and the dark bit in the window on the right are just clutter and could be framed/cropped out imo. This has a nice tonal range. The impact for me is slightly above average I suppose.

Ana said 1023 days ago:

Nice peek of a city. WOuld love to see less on the right, and more on the left.

sanctamonius said 1023 days ago:

well caught, like it in BW.

Anna said 1023 days ago:

Thanks for the comments!
This is an old photo from when I was assisting a photographer on a project of his, that later resulted in a exhibition. This is film, B&W, and developed and so on in a darkroom. My scanner isn't the best, so the lack of quality is to do whit that.
@Beamer, thanks for the thorough comment! :)

adamhh said 1023 days ago:

Great shot! I love the character who doesn't seem to fit in with his/her surroundings. Also really interesting mix of textures going on with the different tile work.

The composition is a little weird to me though, maybe if you'd cut off the signs at the top so the only pure darkness came from the figure?

wings said 1023 days ago:

yup city

Ladybugs_leaf said 1023 days ago:

Love this image. The lighting and toning is just perfect, and I love the composition with the person standing on the left.

Anna said 1021 days ago:

@adamhh, wings and Ladybugs leaf, thanks for your comments! :)
I got my relevance score 3.44 this time! :)

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